tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6781347884043262406.post6122879129665878475..comments2007-10-04T19:43:06.080-07:00Luke Mullerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12303889883709417867noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6781347884043262406.post-35875411202868073822007-10-04T19:43:00.000-07:002007-10-04T19:43:00.000-07:00Comments and Feedback<BR/><BR/>General Comments and Feedback<BR/><BR/>You demonstrated good insight when exploring aspects of your social identity.<BR/><BR/>Theory<BR/><BR/>You were able to outline relevant psychological theory and apply it to specific aspects of your social identity. It might have been useful to outline the 'looking glass self' theory and 'social comparison' theory in more detail. It was good that you linked aspects of your current social identity with past social experiences and social factors. Your concept map provided a comprehensive summary of the factors comprising your social identity. In addition, the concept map was well-thought out and well presented.<BR/><BR/>Research<BR/><BR/>You were able to refer to some research studies. Your blog discussion could have improved with reference to more research studies to support and illustrate the ideas and concepts in your blog discussion.<BR/><BR/>Written Communication<BR/><BR/>Written expression was generally clear and easy to follow. Some grammatical and punctuation errors were present. In-text references and references in the reference list were not always correctly presented, according to APA (5th ed.) format.<BR/><BR/>On-line Engagement<BR/><BR/>As you stated in your self-evaluation, you need to engage more with other peoples' blog discussions and post more messages and discussions on your own blog site. One thing you could do to increase your on-line engagement is to post messages on your blog site that involve situations from your own daily life or other peoples' daily lives (e.g., friends and acquaintances) that reflect examples of the key concepts and psychological theories covered in the unit syllabus.Alexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11706159228916029898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6781347884043262406.post-29066689365467873362007-09-02T18:23:00.000-07:002007-09-02T18:23:00.000-07:00Hey Luke,<BR/>It looks great and is easily set out. I love your concept map, its clear and shows all about you. <BR/>Well done dude =)Bechttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04606250162585330166noreply@blogger.com